Dear friend, I`d really love to take the package holiday to Greece. I`d like to see the natural and learn more about culture. I think Greece is quiet and very sunny place. There are you can enjoy wonderful views and very clean sea. I`d like to walk through the narrow streets and see the sights of Grecce. Also I want to try location dishes. In Greece people are very friendly so you can find them is good friends. Finally I want to say that Greece is perfect place for resort for me and I hope my dream will come true soon! Best wishes, Aleksandra Bozhevolnova
Thank you, Aleksandra, for sharing! I'd like to visit Greece too. You've written about your dream holidays really well! I'm sure some correction will make your email even better: line 2 /change natural to nature/ line 3 /add articles the culture, a quiet ... place line 4 /delete are, the sea is very clean/ line 6 /location to local, delete them is/ line 7 /put comma after finally, add a perfect place/
My dear friend, I`d really love to take the package holiday to Baku. Azerbaijan is country of fires. Every night, buildings, fountains and many parks begin to light. There is a large and deeply sea, which name is Caspian. Baku is a historical place. The city is interested by many sights: Flame Towers, Maiden`s Tower, Carpet museum, center of Heydar Aliev(white building), incredible boulevards and then some. People are kindly and smiled in Baku. I am ready to visit Azerbaijan, because every corner of this country is wonderful and fantastic. I wish everybody to attend Baku! Best wishes, Aisha Ahmedzade
Dear Aisha, Thank you, your email is wonderful! I have made some correction to perfect it: My dear friend, I`d really love to take the package holiday to Baku. Azerbaijan is a country of fires. Every night buildings, fountains and many parks begin to light. There is a large and deep sea, which name is Caspian. Baku is a historical place. The city is interesting because of many sights: the Flame Towers, the Maiden`s Tower, the Carpet museum, the center of Heydar Aliev(white building) and then, some incredible boulevards. People are kind and smiling in Baku. I am ready to visit Azerbaijan, because every corner of this country is wonderful and fantastic. I wish everybody to attend Baku! Best wishes, Aisha Ahmedzade
My dear friend, I'd love to take the package holiday to Norway. I want to see the attraction fjord. This narrow bays and interesting rocky coast. I'm sure it's more beautifully. I'd like to see the natural and learn more about a different culture. There are you can enjoy the clean air and excellently nature of the north. I also want to go to the capital of Norway – Oslo where there is many picturesque landscape, forest and park. In Norway, I would like to come to know new people and I thing that they are very friendly. Finally I want to say that Norway is like a fairyland and I advise to go there least once in your life, Best wishes, Anya Kiryuhina
Dear Anya, Thank you for your good work. Please have a look at the correction I have made. "I want to see the famous fjords, narrow bays and interesting rocky coast of Norway. I'm sure it's very beautiful. I'd like to see the nature and learn more about a different culture. There you can enjoy the clean air and excellent nature of the north. I also want to go to the capital of Norway – Oslo where there is a lot of picturesque landscape, forests and parks. In Norway, I would like to know new people and I think that they are very friendly. Finally, for me Norway is like a fairyland and I advise everyone to go there at least once in your life."
Dear friend, I’d really like to take the holiday to Paris. This is the city of lights. I’m sure it’s an excellent chance to explore Paris fashion and see the place of interest and also meet new people. I’d want to see the Eiffel Tower and triumphal arch. It’s very beautiful buildings. Also I’d like to do to the Operahouse, because it is so fantastic place. There is also a ski resort in French Alps which I want to visit. French is a wonderful country. People in French are very friendly, and so this is yet another reason to spend your holiday in French. I think it will be a good holiday for me. Best wishes, Anush Eremyan.
Dear Anush, It's been a pleasure to read your email. There are a few mistakes though. " I’m sure it’s an excellent chance to explore Paris fashion, see the places of interest and also meet new people. I’d want to see the Eiffel Tower and the Arch of Triumph. It’s very beautiful buildings. Also I’d like to go to the Opera house, because it is so fantastic place." "France is a wonderful country. People in France are very friendly, so this is yet another reason to spend your holiday in France."
My dear friend, I'd really love to take the package holiday to Australia. It's the only country, which is also a continent. I think Australia is great because it's very exotic. Australia is a land of birds and animals, which can't be found anywhere else in the world: the koala, the emu and then. I also want to go to the capital of Australia - Canberra. The city is interesting because of many sights: National Gallery, National Museum, Royal Military College. Finally I want to say that Australia is perfect place for resort for me and I hope my dream will come true soon! Best wishes, Sofya Krikbaeva.
Dear Sofya, Your points for the best holidays are really clever. And your email needs only a tiny bit of correction. Well done! line 5 /change 'then' to 'others'/ The city is interesting because of many sights: the National Gallery, the National Museum, the Royal Military College.
My dear friend, I`d really love to take the package holiday of Lake Garda. In Italy live very kind and helpful people. Also in Italy a lot of attractions: The Uffizi Gallery, Palazzo Ducale, Duomo di Milano, Colosseum and many others. Most of all I love Italian food, it is very tasty and nutritious. Italy is very quiet and peaceful country. I advise you to be sure to visit Italy, in order to develop their horizons. You'll love this country! Best wishes, Dmitry Kozhukhov.
Nicely done, Dmitry! I`d really love to take a package holiday to Lake Garda. Kind and very helpful people live in Italy. Also, in Italy ther are a lot of attractions: The Uffizi Gallery, Palazzo Ducale, Duomo di Milano, the Colosseum and many others.
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Dear friend,
ReplyDeleteI`d really love to take the package holiday to Greece. I`d like to see the natural and learn more about culture. I think Greece is quiet and very sunny place. There are you can enjoy wonderful views and very clean sea. I`d like to walk through the narrow streets and see the sights of Grecce. Also I want to try location dishes. In Greece people are very friendly so you can find them is good friends. Finally I want to say that Greece is perfect place for resort for me and I hope my dream will come true soon!
Best wishes,
Aleksandra Bozhevolnova
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Thank you, Aleksandra, for sharing! I'd like to visit Greece too. You've written about your dream holidays really well! I'm sure some correction will make your email even better:
Deleteline 2 /change natural to nature/
line 3 /add articles the culture, a quiet ... place
line 4 /delete are, the sea is very clean/
line 6 /location to local, delete them is/
line 7 /put comma after finally, add a perfect place/
All the best,
My dear friend,
ReplyDeleteI`d really love to take the package holiday to Baku. Azerbaijan is country of fires. Every night, buildings, fountains and many parks begin to light. There is a large and deeply sea, which name is Caspian. Baku is a historical place. The city is interested by many sights: Flame Towers, Maiden`s Tower, Carpet museum, center of Heydar Aliev(white building), incredible boulevards and then some. People are kindly and smiled in Baku. I am ready to visit Azerbaijan, because every corner of this country is wonderful and fantastic. I wish everybody to attend Baku!
Best wishes,
Aisha Ahmedzade
(100 words)
Dear Aisha,
DeleteThank you, your email is wonderful! I have made some correction to perfect it:
My dear friend,
I`d really love to take the package holiday to Baku. Azerbaijan is a country of fires. Every night buildings, fountains and many parks begin to light. There is a large and deep sea, which name is Caspian. Baku is a historical place. The city is interesting because of many sights: the Flame Towers, the Maiden`s Tower, the Carpet museum, the center of Heydar Aliev(white building) and then, some incredible boulevards. People are kind and smiling in Baku. I am ready to visit Azerbaijan, because every corner of this country is wonderful and fantastic. I wish everybody to attend Baku!
Best wishes,
Aisha Ahmedzade
My dear friend,
ReplyDeleteI'd love to take the package holiday to Norway. I want to see the attraction fjord. This narrow bays and interesting rocky coast. I'm sure it's more beautifully. I'd like to see the natural and learn more about a different culture. There are you can enjoy the clean air and excellently nature of the north. I also want to go to the capital of Norway – Oslo where there is many picturesque landscape, forest and park. In Norway, I would like to come to know new people and I thing that they are very friendly. Finally I want to say that Norway is like a fairyland and I advise to go there least once in your life,
Best wishes,
Anya Kiryuhina
Dear Anya,
DeleteThank you for your good work. Please have a look at the correction I have made.
"I want to see the famous fjords, narrow bays and interesting rocky coast of Norway. I'm sure it's very beautiful. I'd like to see the nature and learn more about a different culture. There you can enjoy the clean air and excellent nature of the north. I also want to go to the capital of Norway – Oslo where there is a lot of picturesque landscape, forests and parks. In Norway, I would like to know new people and I think that they are very friendly. Finally, for me Norway is like a fairyland and I advise everyone to go there at least once in your life."
Dear friend,
ReplyDeleteI’d really like to take the holiday to Paris. This is the city of lights. I’m sure it’s an excellent chance to explore Paris fashion and see the place of interest and also meet new people. I’d want to see the Eiffel Tower and triumphal arch. It’s very beautiful buildings. Also I’d like to do to the Operahouse, because it is so fantastic place. There is also a ski resort in French Alps which I want to visit. French is a wonderful country. People in French are very friendly, and so this is yet another reason to spend your holiday in French. I think it will be a good holiday for me.
Best wishes,
Anush Eremyan.
Dear Anush,
DeleteIt's been a pleasure to read your email. There are a few mistakes though.
" I’m sure it’s an excellent chance to explore Paris fashion, see the places of interest and also meet new people. I’d want to see the Eiffel Tower and the Arch of Triumph. It’s very beautiful buildings. Also I’d like to go to the Opera house, because it is so fantastic place."
"France is a wonderful country. People in France are very friendly, so this is yet another reason to spend your holiday in France."
My dear friend,
ReplyDeleteI'd really love to take the package holiday to Australia. It's the only country, which is also a continent. I think Australia is great because it's very exotic. Australia is a land of birds and animals, which can't be found anywhere else in the world: the koala, the emu and then.
I also want to go to the capital of Australia - Canberra. The city is interesting because of many sights: National Gallery, National Museum, Royal Military College.
Finally I want to say that Australia is perfect place for resort for me and I hope my dream will come true soon!
Best wishes,
Sofya Krikbaeva.
Dear Sofya,
DeleteYour points for the best holidays are really clever. And your email needs only a tiny bit of correction. Well done!
line 5 /change 'then' to 'others'/
The city is interesting because of many sights: the National Gallery, the National Museum, the Royal Military College.
My dear friend,
ReplyDeleteI`d really love to take the package holiday of Lake Garda. In Italy live very kind and helpful people. Also in Italy a lot of attractions: The Uffizi Gallery, Palazzo Ducale, Duomo di Milano, Colosseum and many others. Most of all I love Italian food, it is very tasty and nutritious. Italy is very quiet and peaceful country. I advise you to be sure to visit Italy, in order to develop their horizons. You'll love this country!
Best wishes,
Dmitry Kozhukhov.
Nicely done, Dmitry!
DeleteI`d really love to take a package holiday to Lake Garda. Kind and very helpful people live in Italy. Also, in Italy ther are a lot of attractions: The Uffizi Gallery, Palazzo Ducale, Duomo di Milano, the Colosseum and many others.
I would like to thank you for the efforts you have made in writing this article. I am hoping the same best work from you in the future as well.. học ielts hà nội tốt
ReplyDelete